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[Kaliya Hamlin]

It is in our official background. All I did was draw text from there.
  =Kaliya

On Dec 2, 2007, at 7:23 AM, Victor Grey wrote:

> I would leave out these three sentences as unnecessarily  
> controversial:
> "At the time, these ideas were revolutionary. Very few people were  
> thinking about these issues, much less doing anything about them.  
> IC helped change this."
>
> It could be argued that a -lot- of people had been thinking about  
> it, and that solutions had been tried an failed in the past,  
> possibly because the time wasn't right yet. (There were as I recall  
> people at the Planetwork gatherings who made those arguments.)
>
> Then just change "It not only raised awareness..." to "IC not only  
> raised awareness..."
>
> Just my $.02 -- use if you like.
>
> Cheers!
> =victor.grey

Kaliya - Planetwork Network Director
kaliya at mac.com
network at planetwork.net



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